Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Speech Draft 


here is my speech draft about mathematics 

i wish people dont dislike it because of the topic 

1 comment:

  1. Good connections to the world, especially concerning your topic. Only thing that you could improve on is the grammar, also, please take out the quoted part. If you are going to say it, say a friend, do no mention me. On other thing to add is to start it off with a question maybe, like "who here likes math?"or even, "who here hates math, and thinks its useless in our lives?". Either way, interesting speech, it should be quite appealing to the class considering who likes and dislikes math.

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