Here is my pre-Julius Caesar essay #1:
“It
is sometimes necessary to do things you know are wrong in order to achieve an
important goal.” As a teenager, inexperienced and not yet exposed to dark realm
of the world, it is fairly easy for me to simply disagree with this statement.
We have idealistic minds that still think that the world can be perfect.
However, the reality is that wrongdoings occur every day with the purpose to fulfill
great visions, as well as personal desires. Although both happen all the time,
the former is justified, while the latter is not.
It is inevitable that extreme measures
are taken to achieve goals. Some of these goals involve the benefit of lots of
people. Especially in these cases, there is (are) an “antagonist(s)” who is (are)
“stealing” from others. The antagonist is stealing the rights, freedom, or
other things from the majority. Some famous examples of this situation are the
revolutions. Taking the French Revolution as an example, the few members of the
upper class and the nobility were seizing all the power and forcing the
middle-lower class people, the majority, to endure hard lives. Lots of
reformers had a goal to convert France into a democratic government. In this
case, it was virtually impossible to do the right thing to reach the goal, even
though it had good intentions. Was doing the right thing going to help reach
the goal? Peacefully debating? Certainly not! There was no choice but to fight
poison with poison – to achieve peace by rebellion. English philosopher John
Locke once said that if a government is not governing correctly, people are
responsible to overthrow it. Although rebellion or war is morally incorrect, it
is necessary for the greater good.
In
some situations, there is no choice but to do the wrong thing in order to reach
the right goal. However, in other situations - situations that we deal with everyday,
we do have a choice. In our daily lives, we constantly compete with others for
personal goals or desires. The repetitive occurrence of this throughout our
relatively long life finally led us to think that it is sometimes easier to
take the shortcut. Take this into consideration: Two people are both in a
company with the same experience and seniority. A space is opened up for one
person to get promoted. Each person works very hard to win the employer’s
attention until one day, one person found out that there was a way that would ensure
his promotion. He goes about in the company and spreads some bad rumors about
the other person. As a result, the employer favoured him and he got promoted.
What he did was wrong, but he still reached his goal. In real life, out in the
world, this is happening excessively, leading people into believing that “if I don’t
step over others, others will step over me.” To achieve goals that involve
selfish desires, it is not necessary or justified to do wrong things. Unfortunately,
it is the reality, and it is not going to stop or change.
As
living creatures, we follow the concept of “the survival of the fittest”. We do
anything to survive, to live better, even if it means to act against our
morals. However, as humans, we are unique in a way that we accommodate the
disadvantages of others. We care for each other and unite to accomplish certain
goals, goals that serve for the greater cause. Sometimes, it is necessary to
carry out extreme measures, but this is justified, as the world is imperfect
and sacrifice is inevitable. As a teenager with an idealistic mind, I would
dare to write, that one day, the world might just be free of these dark
realities. Alas, in order to achieve that goal, lots of lines separating good
and bad would have to be crossed, over and over…
I really liked this essay. With exmaples and your own opinions you was able to convince me to agree with you. =)
ReplyDeleteI liked how you took the French Revolution as an example, because it was a fact that i could not argue with therefore had no choice but to agree with you. I also liked how you gave a modern exmaple of the two workers.
Although I thought this essay was almost close to perfect I would work on the hook a little ;)
very good essay ;)!!!
I enjoyed the information and examples you gave in this essay. It was a real example, the french revolution, that most of us have learned about and therefore we can relate to. I also really liked how you used your opinion as the opening paragraph instead of putting your opinions in the end, as I usually do. It was different and refreshing to read. There really isn't much I can criticize other than the hook could be more hook-like, and makes me wanting to read more. Overall, very well written essay, with lots of thought and well planned out.
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