Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Julius Caesar Act II essay - "Power always corrupts the one who holds it."


Throughout history, there had been countless wars and conflicts, in which people suffered and lost their lives. Territory, freedom, and resources, are just several causes of the conflict. Ultimately, all of the bloodshed was merely a struggle for one single capability, power. Whether it is a vicious dictator, or a group of supporters of peace and freedom, power is certainly the answer to their visions, it can make their dreams a reality. Power is a key, a key that unlocks many lakes, including corruption. In our modern day society, power can be defined in many ways and is used for various purposes: good and bad.
        What exactly is power? No two people have the same interpretation of power. Moreover, our views of power change as time passes. In the past, when humans hunted animals for food, power would be considered as physical strength. The leader would be the strongest as he was the greatest at hunting. Thousands of years had passed, and now, in the era of technology, people have developed an entirely different perspective. Nowadays, those who have intelligence, creativity, or money are usually considered as “powerful”. Other forms of power can also include support, privacy, or communication. Nevertheless, one shared characteristic of all these forms of power is the ability to change. Power can influence people, my persuading them, or by force.
        Sometimes, power is given to people for the benefit of everyone. An example is our democratic government. An individual gains support – a form of power – from others and is elected to represent the people. After a government is in power, they try to make the best of it by governing the country well. Another example is peace organizations. They gain support from people who have the same insights, and as they grow more powerful, they become more influential. At that point, these organizations would be able to make differences in the world. Power, when used properly, can be a gift to humankind; a blessing to the world.
        On the contrary, power can also be a poison and a curse. Too many people in throughout history have gained too much power and fell into darkness of corruption. Like power, corruption can also take many forms. Greed is one of them. As one gains power, they might abuse it for their own benefits. An example is bribery in the government. This causes much harm to the citizens because they are being deceived and their rights are violated. Pride is another form of corruption. Too much power sometimes makes an individual think that he is over everyone and is invincible. This leads to impaired judgment. In fact, one of the main reasons that led to the downfall of the Napoleon’s great empire was pride and overconfidence. A more modern example of pride leading to wrong decisions is Steve Jobs. As he became more rich and famous, he has also become proud and lost some humanity. He was harsh on his employees and did many unethical things such as denying his child. This shows us how much a person can change as he/she becomes powerful. As humans, we have a good side and a bad side; there is always temptation. One should handle power carefully, and resist the temptation of corruption.
        It is almost certain that equality between humans will never exist. No matter what happens, there will always be some individuals who are superior. However, this is not necessarily a problem as most people with power handle it correctly. Unfortunately, there are still the few who stray towards the dark paths of corruption, causing harm to others. With that being said, it is crucial that we make careful decisions when giving power to others, or perhaps, handling power ourselves.

3 comments:

  1. LOL. So fast. It's due on Friday you know. Good job though :P

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  2. Your essay is very clean and organized. It gets straight to the points and is easy to follow. I also like how you used modern/present day examples that we can relate and understand better, rather than past stuff (I was expecting Hitler for this topic lol). I think power is just something that enables us to achieve our goals and ideals. Your interpretation that power is the ability to change and influence is different from what I imagined, but I agree with your point. There was nothing that I particularly disliked about your essay, but maybe you could also define what is 'corruption' in general.

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  3. It is a good hook for this type of essay. It gets to the topic immediately and clearly. I like the way of explaining your own thought about the meaning of "power". I, personally, agree with your viewpoints on both pros and cons of the power. Few examples which used for illustrate indicated your opinion accurately. In the end, the conclusion told the reader about your view of "handling power". It is good way to sum up.

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